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‘Responding to the ‘digital essay’: a study of the attitudes of online tutors towards alternative format assignments within a UK university.’

‘Responding to the ‘digital essay’: how do online tutors confront the challenge of alternative format assignments?’

‘Responding to the ‘digital essay’: how do online tutors deal with alternative format assignments?’

'Responding to the ‘digital essay’: tutor experiences in the multimodal classroom’

'Responding to the ‘digital essay’: tutor experiences of assessment and feedback in the multimodal classroom.'

'Responding to the ‘digital essay’: tutor approaches to alternative format assignments in the online multimodal classroom.'


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'Responding to the ‘digital essay’: how tutors approach alternative format assignments in the online multimodal classroom.' 

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'Responding to the ‘digital essay’: how online tutors approach alternative format assignments in the multimodal classroom.'